silent bedroom whispers
linger in my hair...
before you leave
one more cup
to fill me
Pamela A. Babusci
First published in Five Lines Down 1995
i am
a prisoner
in this
snowflake
melt me
Pamela A. Babusci
First published in Five Lines Down 1995
at dawn
my aching limbs
my wanton heart...
somehow, somewhere
you invaded me
Pamela A. Babusci
First published in Five Lines Down 1995
i remove my cross
before we lie down
together
we make shadows
on the wall
Pamela A. Babusci
First published in Frogpond 1995
11 years ago
6 comments:
Bravissimo!
Very sophisticated, especially the first one.
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I like them all, but this one is utterly fantastic!
i remove my cross
before we lie down
together
we make shadows
on the wall
Wow! A beautifully crafted tanka.
I'm also looking forward to seeing you on 3Lights later on!
weblink: 3Lights Gallery website
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Actually, the archive link for Pamela's work is here:
Bohemian Spirit
Well worth revisiting, I did! ;-)
Alan
Thank you Alan, Pam gave me the 3LightsGallery link (she is little involved with computers, etc, and asked ME to add things) but will add Bohemian Spirit now here, she will be pleased.
Enjoyed these very much!! Have read everything down to here now! It's all good.
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