24.6.08

EROTIC TANKA

silent bedroom whispers
linger in my hair...
before you leave
one more cup
to fill me


Pamela A. Babusci
First published in Five Lines Down 1995


i am
a prisoner
in this
snowflake
melt me


Pamela A. Babusci
First published in Five Lines Down 1995



at dawn
my aching limbs
my wanton heart...
somehow, somewhere
you invaded me


Pamela A. Babusci
First published in Five Lines Down 1995



i remove my cross
before we lie down
together
we make shadows
on the wall

Pamela A. Babusci
First published in Frogpond 1995

6 comments:

The Dark Lady said...

Bravissimo!

Twilight Traveler said...

Very sophisticated, especially the first one.

Alan Summers said...

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I like them all, but this one is utterly fantastic!

i remove my cross
before we lie down
together
we make shadows
on the wall


Wow! A beautifully crafted tanka.

I'm also looking forward to seeing you on 3Lights later on!
weblink: 3Lights Gallery website

Alan Summers said...

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Actually, the archive link for Pamela's work is here:
Bohemian Spirit

Well worth revisiting, I did! ;-)

Alan

WORDCRAFTER said...

Thank you Alan, Pam gave me the 3LightsGallery link (she is little involved with computers, etc, and asked ME to add things) but will add Bohemian Spirit now here, she will be pleased.

Antonionioni said...

Enjoyed these very much!! Have read everything down to here now! It's all good.