13.9.09

life sometimes
gets too
overwhelming
that i just want a man
to rain upon me


Pamela A. Babusci
pub. in Notes from the Gean
2009

2 comments:

S. said...

And so a favorite page awakens once again and I am happy for it this morning.

P K Padhy said...

A very creative Tanka with sensuous metaphor and imagery.
"a man to rain upon me" is an excellent literary expression.